Percy Jackson the God (WATTY AWARDS 2014)

Percy Jackson the God (WATTY AWARDS 2014)

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laserlogan34 By laserlogan34 Updated Feb 01

Percy is betrayed by the ones he loves most... Annabeth but what will happen when Artemis explains her true feelings to percy and percy confesses his true feelings to her

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LadyHaunting LadyHaunting 6 days ago
God of models like what type of model? The hot human cloth models? The models used in science
Your not giving yourself the opportunity to describe the setting and the places he goes to. Punctuation and dialogue isn't being used correctly.
DevenFegans DevenFegans Mar 26
Models, why, just, nope won't ask I'll be over there on the other side of the exit...
Secrxt_luv Secrxt_luv Jan 26
Hahahahah models this is going way too fast, and he has way to many domains....yeah....way too fast
Jason_Grace2 Jason_Grace2 Aug 03, 2015
You should've had the pain bigger. the heart wrenching moments when he found out. the pain he felt, the betrayal, the loneliness he experienced.
THE_PENTECOSTAL THE_PENTECOSTAL Jan 18, 2015
Story line sounds good,but you might want to work on your punctuations.