Lovers, 2 timers, oh yea and the annoying high school slut -ON HOLD!!

Lovers, 2 timers, oh yea and the annoying high school slut -ON HOLD!!

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-Insert name here- By karacan55 Updated Sep 08, 2011

Maxine had waited all her life. she finally was in high school. she thought everything would be fine. everything would be absolutely perfect but she was wrong. her life turns upside down ever since she was in Merry Christine High.

Lizzy151 Lizzy151 Aug 09, 2010
I heard about you from evilflyingcupcakes and im glad i decided to check out your stories!!!! and i agree with KissandYell, maybe you should slow it down a bit? But its a great story!!!!!
AlwaysSecondToHer3 AlwaysSecondToHer3 Jul 28, 2010
Imma a huge fan of all your stories!! I hope I don't sound like stalkerish creepy.. But imma fan!! Haha 
Darkmajik666 Darkmajik666 Jul 25, 2010
Wow that was pretty good and I HATE romantic/drama things yet this sparked my interest, good job :)
sammystheruler sammystheruler Jul 18, 2010
great story oh and I know how you feel about grammar but I just can't stop myself from using it
karacan55 karacan55 Jul 17, 2010
@KissAndYell okay sure. thats a great idea. except i dont like capitalizing things. it gets annoying. and i know about grammar. i stink at writing in school anyways this is like practice exept no one checks it but readers
KissAndYell KissAndYell Jul 17, 2010
I like it so far just a few constructive ideas:
                              Grammar needs a little work- Capitalize the 'I's and thr first letters in sentences.
                              Slow it down JUST A TOUCH. Maybe they could have talked for longer?