Maxine had waited all her life. she finally was in high school. she thought everything would be fine. everything would be absolutely perfect but she was wrong. her life turns upside down ever since she was in Merry Christine High.
I heard about you from evilflyingcupcakes and im glad i decided to check out your stories!!!! and i agree with KissandYell, maybe you should slow it down a bit? But its a great story!!!!!
Imma a huge fan of all your stories!! I hope I don't sound like stalkerish creepy.. But imma fan!! Haha
Wow that was pretty good and I HATE romantic/drama things yet this sparked my interest, good job :)
great story oh and I know how you feel about grammar but I just can't stop myself from using it
@KissAndYell okay sure. thats a great idea. except i dont like capitalizing things. it gets annoying. and i know about grammar. i stink at writing in school anyways this is like practice exept no one checks it but readers
I like it so far just a few constructive ideas:
Grammar needs a little work- Capitalize the 'I's and thr first letters in sentences.
Slow it down JUST A TOUCH. Maybe they could have talked for longer?