Bruises

Bruises

48.1K Reads 1.7K Votes 22 Part Story
Caitlin By chemicallyarctic Updated Aug 06

Please don't notice me. Please don't notice me. Please. Don't. Notice. Me. I kept my head down as I sped to home room. My heart pounded every time I thought I heard his voice and made me quicken my pace. I head into class and silently curse my luck as I see everyone's already here. Please god don't let them see it...

Every chapter is making the reader want more, without a cliffhanger! Cliffhangers kinda make readers annoyed, so good job!
I love the description! It draws the reader in. Good job! 😄