Lost

Lost

44.3K Reads 2.4K Votes 39 Part Story
olivia By oliviah15 Completed

Sometimes I'm not always sure what to do. I feel like I'm always wrong, like I'm never good enough. I'm invisible. It's as if I don't exist. If I really didn't exist I don't think anyone would care. I'm all alone in this great big world. I'm lost.

Maddie has never been good enough, her perfect sister, Megan, always manages to outshine her. Her father never pays attention to her, he's always worried about Megan. 

Every Tuesday and Thursday Maddie goes to group where she shares her feelings. Every week it the same thing until Maddie gets a new lab partner. Riley Parker, every girls dream date.

It is interesting so far. Good story! Also great grammar and structure :)
isaboble isaboble Apr 03
Powerful stuff!  Loved the way you ended it!  On to the next one!
Nice plot line, and has already begun to draw the reader in to your story.
fromnetflix fromnetflix Apr 04
I want to be alone when I'm in the room with a person so I'm kinda opposite.
Frodacious Frodacious Apr 27
Interesting start so far, but I personally feel like the sentences are choppy and could be replaced with some commas, em dashes, and/or semi colons.
It is interesting so far. Good story! Also great grammar and structure :)