Lost

Lost

70.4K Reads 3.6K Votes 39 Part Story
olivia By oliviah15 Completed

Sometimes I'm not always sure what to do. I feel like I'm always wrong, like I'm never good enough. I'm invisible. It's as if I don't exist. If I really didn't exist I don't think anyone would care. I'm all alone in this great big world. I'm lost.

Maddie has never been good enough, her perfect sister, Megan, always manages to outshine her. Her father never pays attention to her, he's always worried about Megan. 

Every Tuesday and Thursday Maddie goes to group where she shares her feelings. Every week it's the same thing until Maddie gets a new lab partner. Riley Parker, every girls dream date.

CidneyMatthews CidneyMatthews Apr 24, 2016
It is interesting so far. Good story! Also great grammar and structure :)
- - Apr 03, 2016
Powerful stuff!  Loved the way you ended it!  On to the next one!
GeekFanfiction1 GeekFanfiction1 Apr 24, 2016
Nice plot line, and has already begun to draw the reader in to your story.
fromnetflix fromnetflix Apr 04, 2016
I want to be alone when I'm in the room with a person so I'm kinda opposite.
Frodacious Frodacious Apr 27, 2016
Interesting start so far, but I personally feel like the sentences are choppy and could be replaced with some commas, em dashes, and/or semi colons.
CidneyMatthews CidneyMatthews Apr 24, 2016
It is interesting so far. Good story! Also great grammar and structure :)