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My Queen (Thranduil Love Story)

My Queen (Thranduil Love Story)

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Calavae, a elf of noble birth, saw her village burned to ashes. Will Thranduil save her or will he abandon her?

I will glad to see if there's was a fight in this stories :(
It seems to go a little too fast. Maybe if you add more detail and more dialog.  I love the plot though
Poot-The-Pug Poot-The-Pug Jul 27, 2016
I concur with Arodriquez763, this is moving at an oddly quick pace. Is this before or after Thandruil lost his former queen?
Lady_Greenwood Lady_Greenwood Jan 10, 2015
                              Well, I suppose I didn't put enough description of her sorrow. But she is sad.
Lady_Greenwood Lady_Greenwood Jan 10, 2015
                              Is there any improvements or errors that can be fixed?