Calavae, a elf of noble birth, saw her village burned to ashes. Will Thranduil save her or will he abandon her?
It seems to go a little too fast. Maybe if you add more detail and more dialog. I love the plot though
I concur with Arodriquez763, this is moving at an oddly quick pace. Is this before or after Thandruil lost his former queen?
Well, I suppose I didn't put enough description of her sorrow. But she is sad.
Is there any improvements or errors that can be fixed?