Born to Run

Born to Run

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Jo By VividlyInspired Completed

A Queen with an heir. A King left to grieve. A girl who knows only how to flee.

GraceKnight5 GraceKnight5 Sep 26, 2012
@VividlyInspired So long as you never stopped writing, it should have. "We are all apprentices in a profession in which no one becomes a master."
VividlyInspired VividlyInspired Sep 26, 2012
@GraceKnight5 thanks for the tip! haha, I'm hoping that my writing is better than this now, I wrote this when I was 15!
GraceKnight5 GraceKnight5 Sep 26, 2012
Ahh! The adverbs! You need to do some serious chopping. For the first line, you could replace "he said charmingly" with "he said with a charming smile." Same meaning, but more elegant and far less choppy.
Dirtydianaxxxxx Dirtydianaxxxxx Jun 18, 2012
I have finishing reading this book and I loved...it really good
VividlyInspired VividlyInspired Jun 17, 2012
@Dirtydianaxxxxx Awesome!! This is the only novel that I have completed, so read up! ;) 
                              
                              @latsat Thank YOU for reading it! I hope you like how it develops :)
VividlyInspired VividlyInspired Sep 05, 2011
@StarlightInspiration This is true! I'm so good at plotting :P