His Bite is the Sweetest Poison

His Bite is the Sweetest Poison

4K Reads 106 Votes 7 Part Story
Saudsters By Saudsters Updated Jun 10, 2012

Allison has just moved to Rose Valley to get away from all of the painful memories of her past. Nothing much goes on in Rose Valley so she feels right at home. One day when exploring the town she runs across a bar called The Crimson Moon, but it wasn't all that it seemed. The owner offers her a job and after some thinking, she takes it. What she doesn't realize is that by taking the job she has just ruined her chances of ever having the normal life she wanted. Strange things start to happen to her and the only one who can explain what's going on is the one boy who is the strangest one of all.

Scribeholic Scribeholic Jul 17, 2010
Not bad, I think it has a lot of promise but it seems like it could use some trimming on the description of the cottage, at least the way it's put on the reader all at once like this as it doesnt seem relevent at the moment.  can't wait to read more!
Countrii_Bumkin1769 Countrii_Bumkin1769 Jul 16, 2010
I'm so sorry about what happend to your story. I saw your comment on another users page and rushed over hehe. 
                              
                              You can count on receaving my votes all ova again. Love your story! Haha. 
SierraJaid SierraJaid Jul 15, 2010
Hey, i'm new 2 ur story. Saw ur msg at Outsider 245's msg board and thought 2 help u out. I see he has already. I can well imagine how i'd freak, did 'godforbid' my work went down the drain. We all work hard. So i voted all parts of your story so far.   Plz, don't cry. 
Saudsters Saudsters Jul 15, 2010
@AnnaKathaleena 
                              @jamilla
                               @iceangel1208 
                               Thank you so much for the votes. It really means a lot. Thanks again.  :)
jamilla_ jamilla_ Jul 15, 2010
@GoldenRose822 sry to hear bout the malfunction.... it happened to me 2...... i think some1 spamed u.............. anyways.................. it was fun 2 read it again.......... voted :] 
AnnaKathaleena AnnaKathaleena Jul 15, 2010
Sorry to hear about the malfunctioning :) This almost better the second time reading :)