Jasmine is a regular girl, with regular intentions in life she stays with her dad in Calfornia for the whole summer, little did she know her life would change. Would she give everything up for the guy of her dreams or a sexy deliquent?
Well I decided to edit it, because I read over it and noticed all the grammar mistakes and it was pretty confusing.. so hopefully it won't be confusing.
dis is good. jus a lil fix on ur da gramma and it wood b good.
@thegalwiththegall Thanks for the advice I am new to this, and editing it takes a long time but anyways Thank you
Haha, some grammatical errors that makes it sorta confusing, but it's okay - very nice beginning :)