When I look at you... I never knew life would be so complicated

When I look at you... I never knew life would be so complicated

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Poetrygirl94 By Poetrygirl94 Updated Dec 13, 2010

Jasmine is a regular girl, with regular intentions in life she stays with her dad in Calfornia for the whole summer, little did she know her life would change. Would she give everything up for the guy of her dreams or a sexy deliquent?

Poetrygirl94 Poetrygirl94 Jul 26, 2010
Well I decided to edit it, because I read over it and noticed all the grammar mistakes and it was pretty confusing.. so hopefully it won't be confusing.
LadyAsphodel LadyAsphodel Jul 24, 2010
dis is good. jus a lil fix on ur da gramma and it wood b good. 
Poetrygirl94 Poetrygirl94 Jul 21, 2010
@thegalwiththegall Thanks for the advice I am new to this, and editing it takes a long time but anyways Thank you
galwithgall galwithgall Jul 21, 2010
Haha, some grammatical errors that makes it sorta confusing, but it's okay - very nice beginning :)