Life is Sweet

Life is Sweet

89 Reads 7 Votes 2 Part Story
Alyssa McKendry By AlyssaMcKendry Updated Dec 04, 2014

This is a story about an 18 year old girl named, Maya Callahan who is currently going to college and works at an acclaimed bakery called, Sweet Tooth (at least that's the name of the bakery for now, I might change it).   Her two best friends work with her at the bakery so her days are filled with fun and of course, drama.  When she crosses paths with Nick Johnson, the cute boy on the college basketball team,  her life changes for the better, at least for now...

This is my first draft so don't expect anything too special, but constructive criticism is welcomed and of course votes are too!

Hope you enjoy reading it!

  • bakery
  • baking
  • basketball
  • boys
  • college
  • contemporary
  • friends
  • fun
  • girls
  • love
  • newadult
  • romance
  • teen
  • teenfiction
JessicaMckendry JessicaMckendry Dec 04, 2014
This is so cute, I literally can't get over it. Please update soon!!!
jinkynaranjooraiz jinkynaranjooraiz Nov 30, 2014
this made me smile while reading... hope to read more updates... and oh, i voted :)
Gowdan Gowdan Nov 18, 2014
This story has a warm vibe to it, which is really nice.
                              Overall it felt like you were talking to us rather than showing us, which isn't really a bad thing but again this is your first draft. This isn't something I would normally read but for some odd reason I really enjoyed it.
UmmsYea UmmsYea Nov 16, 2014
It was pretty good. As far as a first chapter, it didnt seem to catch my attention. And the whole chapter was basically dialouge, but it was decent (:
Wxves_ Wxves_ Nov 16, 2014
I think your story flows really well and the relationships are nice and realistic :D good start, looking forward to reading more :)