A Love Story With A Badass

A Love Story With A Badass

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Ní-Nï???????????????? By _PERKSOFBEINGAMISFIT Completed

I can't believe I waited and missed all these good-looking guys. Me, myself personally, I am a guy. I am gay, and I don't hide it from anyone because whoever I choose to love is my choice. 

First, I didn't expect to fall in love with this amazing guy even though he is known as a badboy... I'd rather choose a badass.

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aliyahh_liyahh aliyahh_liyahh Nov 16, 2014
Good so far! Like the person said it'd be better if you used quotation marks in your writing, so that we're able to tell when a different person is talking.
lostmyjamz lostmyjamz Nov 16, 2014
Awh, the last few lines were so adorbs! Hey, can I suggest you use proper speech marks (") to make it clearer? I think I'd prefer a tad bit longer chapters too, hehe! It's off to a rather brisk but sweet start and I can't wait to see how this turns out! :)
lostmyjamz lostmyjamz Nov 16, 2014
Nice start, hehe I'm intrigued! I see this is boyxbox, got nothing against them. Can I suggest a nice summary of the story to be published first? Maybe an author's note? But it's super interesting! :)