We are not damned

We are not damned

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stopman23 By stopman23 Updated Jan 15, 2015

Jake winterson was a kid that would sleep during his classes and still get A's and B's in them. He only has three friends and wears leather jacks even in the summer. No one has ever given much of a thought about him till one day three men in trench coats come into his class and attack him. now his in the fight of his life with forces that he didn't even think existed.

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jh-chan jh-chan Jan 16, 2015
omg wth your paragraphs are too long! even though it's good i'd suggest that you break the paragraphs, shorten some texts...
                              
                              or cut into chapters that are just episode parts.
                              
                              keep workin'!
                              
                              jhchan