The Girl and her Gun

The Girl and her Gun

23.6K Reads 839 Votes 5 Part Story
DJValtiger By DJValtiger Updated Dec 23, 2014

Annabella snow is a werecat that turns into a white tiger and she is a assassin and her mate is not only a werewolf but he is a alpha of the strongest pack midnight claw pack what would happen?read to find out.

Quatainia Quatainia Mar 31
You should somehow have someone edit it. You need to put " " on each side of what they're saying, plus words are misspelled and some aren't spaced. 
                              Not trying to be rude or mean. 
                              Just sticking it out there.
arodz110202 arodz110202 Mar 29
Glaring is almost the same as staring they both mean looking
play4416 play4416 Mar 26
Constructive criticism: maybe try writing in paragraphs and use " before and after someone talks so it's easier to read. But I really love your plot so far! (And I know you didn't edit this and I'm not asking it to be perfect and you don't have to listen to me.)
katvoi5 katvoi5 Apr 10, 2016
Can you put "" when people are talking to each other please it's confusing
- - Mar 20, 2016
This is awesome but I have a little constructive criticism i think you should make it into smaller paragraphs and make the chapters a bit longer but your writing is amazing
BentOverBckwrds1xo BentOverBckwrds1xo Jun 18, 2016
Wait shes a white tiger?! U do realise white tigers are inbreds right? LEL