The Girl and her Gun

The Girl and her Gun

26.3K Reads 909 Votes 5 Part Story
DJValtiger By DJValtiger Updated Dec 23, 2014

Annabella snow is a werecat that turns into a white tiger and she is a assassin and her mate is not only a werewolf but he is a alpha of the strongest pack midnight claw pack what would happen?read to find out.

  • adventure
  • cool
  • fiction
  • sad
  • werewolf
Quatainia Quatainia Mar 31, 2017
You should somehow have someone edit it. You need to put " " on each side of what they're saying, plus words are misspelled and some aren't spaced. 
                              Not trying to be rude or mean. 
                              Just sticking it out there.
sparrowhawk21 sparrowhawk21 Dec 18, 2017
What's with the squealing girls I know wouldn't even do that .?
in-pain101 in-pain101 Mar 29, 2017
Glaring is almost the same as staring they both mean looking
play4416 play4416 Mar 26, 2017
Constructive criticism: maybe try writing in paragraphs and use " before and after someone talks so it's easier to read. But I really love your plot so far! (And I know you didn't edit this and I'm not asking it to be perfect and you don't have to listen to me.)
Queenyofsarcasm Queenyofsarcasm Sep 20, 2017
It doesn't even look like two people are talking, it seems thinking
Maria20178 Maria20178 3 days ago
Well it good but u should write a longer chapter or something and pls update soon it not a longer story.