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Poems from a Troubled Mind

Poems from a Troubled Mind

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jamilla_ By jamilla_ Completed

Out of darkness born.
From inner sadness torn.

naphtalialmashey naphtalialmashey Nov 30, 2013
oh I am so sorry, I hope you get better.
                              But the poem was very well written.  I enjoy reading poems.
CarronMclean CarronMclean Aug 28, 2013
This is beautiful it's different from any poem I've ever read x
ElizabethShadow ElizabethShadow May 09, 2013
I like what you have here, there was a few places where the rhythm was off but for the most part I enjoyed the way you wrote it somewhat breaky. Write on. 
                              <3 Liz
                              Stay Beautiful
poseyfamily poseyfamily May 07, 2013
This is a good detailed poem I like to read this kind of stuff
ecmcblue12 ecmcblue12 Aug 17, 2011
thats quite dark LOL x but i love it! i would steal it but tht would be evil :3 lol xx
xlivelifelovex xlivelifelovex Jun 24, 2011
amazing poam i absolutley loved it!!! it described so much and was full of emotion and depth...i loved it:))