Out of darkness born.
From inner sadness torn.
oh I am so sorry, I hope you get better.
But the poem was very well written. I enjoy reading poems.
This is beautiful it's different from any poem I've ever read x
I like what you have here, there was a few places where the rhythm was off but for the most part I enjoyed the way you wrote it somewhat breaky. Write on.
This is a good detailed poem I like to read this kind of stuff
thats quite dark LOL x but i love it! i would steal it but tht would be evil :3 lol xx
amazing poam i absolutley loved it!!! it described so much and was full of emotion and depth...i loved it:))