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Murder To Excellence

Murder To Excellence

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Itskndllk By Itskndllk Updated Jul 17, 2015

‘Black excellence.’  

Rose. Black. Twenty-two. Recent college graduate.
Raphael. Greek. Twenty-nine. Extremely good-looking, wealthy and – most of all – cold.

What was it? A compromis? An arrangement? More like blackmail. And now that he has her, will this relationship remain more like a deal?  Or will actual feelings get involved?

“I expect you to let me kiss you when I want. You don’t decline,” he demanded and took a few steps to the corner she stood in. He placed his hands next to her, really cornering her. His voice was hoarse and full of authority, and Rose almost felt herself giving in. “Do you understand?” 

She raised her eyebrow and cocked her head to the side a bit, challenging him. 

“Do… you… understand?” his lips brushed against hers with every word he said. She had the urge to just kiss him but as she had told herself not to, she turned her head so his lips were now on her cheek.

“This is not part of the arrangement.”

“Then I’ll make it one from now on,” he retorted and held her face by her cheeks with one hand, forcing her to look at him. 

“You can’t,” she mumbled as it was hard for her to speak with his hand like that.

“I can. If you don’t agree, you can leave.”

She stared into his green eyes as she thought about leaving. She knew she was going to get hurt if she’d stay but she didn’t want her entire family to get hurt either. 

He let go of her face and crushed his lips onto hers. By now he had pressed his body completely on to hers and Rose felt her body heating up again. Raphael wasn’t gentle during the kiss at all but he wasn’t harmful either. He was dominant and left no room for her to take control of what was happening in that elevator. 


cchiminie cchiminie Jun 09, 2016
Why is it that the girl is always a virgin but the guy isnt? *sigh*
melliemel4ever melliemel4ever Aug 31, 2016
Omg…he's so crazy. He just X'd out her friends faces & then popped that photo in a frame like that's normal behaviour  😂
BobbiBlue11 BobbiBlue11 Apr 20, 2016
Not tryna be a grammar Nazi but Madam is for married women. Mademoiselle is for single women. Like Ms. And Mrs.
Nonosbah Nonosbah Oct 23, 2016
You're a male so statistically speaking its highly likely that you are.
moonlightangel77 moonlightangel77 Jan 25, 2016
Every head bow n every eye close. 
                              Father in heaven, plz put ur spirit of protection over Rose, in ur mighty name, amen.
Ladylux Ladylux Sep 26, 2015
Your story should incorporate who the character is in it, not ANs.