Is Love a Disaster?(Redo the concept)

Is Love a Disaster?(Redo the concept)

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Elenafor2 By Trinienglishgirl Updated Oct 26, 2015

Rain fell making my clothes wet and muddy.My hair was disheveled and my clothes where ripping as i ran through the forest.I was covered in blood and fear had struck all over me as i ran for my life.Was it worth it?I wasn't certain but all i knew i had to survive and see his smiling face.I jumped off the cliff into the river it was the end for me.

kariilee23 kariilee23 Dec 27, 2012
Hi! You told me to check out your story and sorry it took me a long time. I got the idea of your plot but some sentences were run ons so you may want to consider changing that. But so far, it isn't bad. Your book summary.blurb was pretty suspenseful so good job on that!
MikeJPW MikeJPW Jul 13, 2010
Nice bit of writing!
                              
                              I'll stay tuned for sure :D
                              
                              
                              ps- check out my stories "Loved to Death" and "The Parks Escape" if you like it comment and vote!
                              
                              -Mike <3