The Dragon and the Princess

The Dragon and the Princess

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Dragon By Dragon__Wolf Completed

You all know the old fairy-tale's where an evil and cruel dragon kidnaps the princess because of her beauty and then knights in shinning armour arrives to save her. After saving her they get the half of the kingdom and marry the princess and lives happily ever after.. But this story is very different... There was once were a beautiful, kind princess named Lydia who got engaged to a prince, but the princess wasn't in love with him at all. One day as she was sleeping peacefully in her bed with her window opened, a dragon named Lithon attacked the kingdom. In it's attack on the kingdom the dragon flew to the castle and was going to destroy it from pure hatred for the royal family, but then he saw the princess through her open window. The dragon fell for her beauty immediately, so he decided to kidnap her, it would also be the perfect revenge on the royal family. So the dragon took the princess to his place, the princess was of course not happy about that and she did freak out. She didn't wanted to live with a dragon! But then, the dragon reached it's house and he changed into a handsome young man! Even though its forbidden for them to be together, the princess slowly fell for the dragon and the dragon fell for her.. but how will this fairy tale end..? like every other, where the prince comes and slay the dragon and gets the girl, or will it be different this time?
  
  
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Um..I think it's 'flinched' not 'winched'....winch means to hoist or pull something...other than that, this is fantastic!! I really loe the imagery! It's really classic!! :)
rowdyqueen rowdyqueen Sep 18
I like your story so far but if I were you I would go back and delete some of the description. I already feel like I know the entire story and I haven't read it yet. But other than that great job so far
AlyssaHertz AlyssaHertz Jun 07
If she were me I would just be like
                              
                              'Take me away go the heck ahead, not like it's going to help screaming'
Shut the **** up! I will speak my ******* mind! And talk my head off. I will not be silent. Stupid man.
Thanks :) yeah they whole story needs editing, especially the description :)
This turd ball gives guys are bad name. I will hunt him down and punish him