first contact

first contact

5 Part Story 845 Reads 28 Votes
garrett By gkelly Updated Mar 06, 2012

humanity discoves life on a distant planet they are stornger then us faster then us and armed with blistic firearms

This story has good vivid details and description. The plot is also very well written. Keep up the good work, and add as much detail as possible (but not too much) to make it lively and realistic.
Sylphine Sylphine Aug 25, 2011 09:13PM
The concept of your story is very intriguing, I love the originality of it. Definetly captured my attention. Good job!
HalloRaiinbow HalloRaiinbow May 08, 2011 04:25AM
(: I like your story, its different than a-lot of things I have read. Just a few issues with punctiation, but everyone has that, in daily lives.  (: -VOTES- (: