first contact

first contact

845 Reads 28 Votes 5 Part Story
garrett By gkelly Updated Mar 06, 2012

humanity discoves life on a distant planet they are stornger then us faster then us and armed with blistic firearms

toritheblueseahorse toritheblueseahorse Nov 11, 2011
This story has good vivid details and description. The plot is also very well written. Keep up the good work, and add as much detail as possible (but not too much) to make it lively and realistic.
Sylphine Sylphine Aug 25, 2011
The concept of your story is very intriguing, I love the originality of it. Definetly captured my attention. Good job!
HalloRaiinbow HalloRaiinbow May 08, 2011
(: I like your story, its different than a-lot of things I have read. Just a few issues with punctiation, but everyone has that, in daily lives.  (: -VOTES- (: