A 16 year old girl named arie meets the boys of her dreams till she finds out she's pregnant!! Read to find out
You're supposed to capitalize proper nouns. Proper nouns include names, so "jaz" should be "Jaz"
@MusicHeart10 plus I don't think my writing skills are better then your I just think people like my book more
Don't you know you capitalize "I?" That's very basic grammar. Did you go to school? I'm going to point out the rest of your mistakes.
@MusicHeart10 honestly I would think I improved a little, I began writing this story in 6th grade and have a learning disability, I used this story as a way to get better, basically learning from my mistakes