16 and pregnant

16 and pregnant

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KaylaisDun By kayla_banks12 Updated Mar 16

A 16 year old girl named arie meets the boys of her dreams till she finds out she's pregnant!! Read to find out

MusicHeart10 MusicHeart10 Aug 19, 2016
You're supposed to capitalize proper nouns. Proper nouns include names, so "jaz" should be "Jaz"
kayla_banks12 kayla_banks12 Sep 22, 2016
@MusicHeart10  plus I don't think my writing  skills are better then your  I just think people like my book more
MusicHeart10 MusicHeart10 Aug 19, 2016
Don't you know you capitalize "I?" That's very basic grammar. Did you go to school? I'm going to point out the rest of your mistakes.
kayla_banks12 kayla_banks12 Sep 22, 2016
@MusicHeart10  honestly I would think I improved  a little, I began writing this story in 6th grade and have a learning disability, I used this story as a way to get better, basically learning from my mistakes