The Underground(Lesbian Story) Wattys2016

The Underground(Lesbian Story) Wattys2016

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Nique By PhoenixWrites Updated Oct 19

My name is Max, I'm just a normal college student. I go to class, hang out after school, stay up all night, invent weapons and help slay monsters... Oh wait, you don't know about us, do you? I'm an inventor and this is part of my life... living and studying in The Underground.

mybloop5522 mybloop5522 Oct 10
Your writing skills are amazing. I have never read something that made me want to keep reading as much as this one chapter did. I cannot wait to keep on reading your book. I love it so far. Keep up the good work!
FionaJohn FionaJohn Mar 25
This is a pretty informative start. It seems really interesting since I'm actually into monsters and all things that go bump in the night. I might actually continue this. Max seems like a cool character and I love the way she thinks.
Fading_Destiny Fading_Destiny Jul 25, 2015
The chapter was clear and straight but could use I little more of a pull. You need to have some kind of a moviation to keep people reading. You almost have it. Neat writing. Is max a girl?
chiliad chiliad Jul 12, 2015
This story presents a whole new idea for me and is so artfully inserted into our own world that I can't help wondering if it's real. :) It's so creative and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Lilty1357cute Lilty1357cute Jan 26, 2015
You are an amazing writer and I hope to read another of your books!!!! Well done
Rianel_Lewrej Rianel_Lewrej Dec 07, 2014
I love it how you describe some thing early on the story. And how you kept things in secret at the process.
                              
                              About technicalities, I have found some minor ones, but it doesn't change the fact that you are a good writer and your imagination is vast!
                              
                              Keep up the good work. :D