Try having Vic Fuentes as a dad ? Yeah well it's pretty cool
She wanted to dance on tables in palm spring and Vic was like nah we gotta daughter
how can you tell your parents that oh god they would kill me
The beginning of your story isn't really catchy and your sentences are choppy. Im sure the more you write you will get better. Just keep trying and don't give up. You can do anything you set your mind to.
The only way to make this better is to try starting sentences that don't start with I all the time
It would be stupid if she argued w/that, she admitted to a lot of shīt that she shouldn't have done