You know the drill by now honey, why spoil the book for ya. :3 but I will say this, is a Gay furry book so ya, it's what I specialize in
Corrections are need in several paragraphs, but.... this is the first book I read on here and immediately wish to read more.
so far so good. just try and look out for spelling and grammar and such
(Vigorously hugs both Amethyst and Cotton) AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
WHY DO I HAVE 1500 WORD+ CHAPTERS AND I HAVE WAYY BETTER WRITING AND ALOT MORE CHAPTERS BUT THIS HAS 20K AND I HAVE 1K.
im sad that the mother was like that to Cotton. She didnt need to slap him and say not to come back.... Im just glad my mother accepted me.
I think dropping names like skeillex and that other one might have cut the mood a bit. Should make up your own artists to keep the atmosphere of the world youre creating in your story. Otherwise the reader relates it to real life and starts to see flaws