what more can I say besides they fix her!
contains lots of ooc, an funny stuped shit you've been worn :P
an cussing (hidan &amp;gt;_&amp;gt; an some blood)
I don't want to sound mean I really don't but perhaps you get your self a beta reader or an editor and it's a really interesting story
@akatsukixsakure4ever It's ok, I'm just a Grammar Nazi sometimes.... But its an interesting story.