Used and abused

Used and abused

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ceryswilson1998 By ceryswilson1998 Updated Jul 22

18 year old Zoe finds herself kidnapped and used by the famous luke hemmings who uses her as a sex slave

  • 5sos
  • heartbreak
  • kidnapped
  • love
  • lukehemmings
  • sexslave
Ok so you get kidnapped wake up tied to a bed and that's. The first thing you say all calm and shxt
Why is she so calm about this? Is she not wondering why she's tied to a bed?
Smooth..... wtf hahaa i would have started to ramble about when i pictured this moment it my head or just stared at him
To many ands in this paragraph. Use periods or commas to sperate and distinguish the sentences.. (friendly criticism )
Your right she so chill about this I would be cussing at him
charmingharreh charmingharreh Nov 21, 2016
HOW DID WE END UP TALKING IN THE FIRST PLACE YOU SAID YOU LIKE MY COBAIN SHIRT NOW WERE WALKING BACK TO YOUR PLACE