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I Fell In Love With Him While He Was In A Coma

I Fell In Love With Him While He Was In A Coma

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normaa By normaa Updated Sep 22, 2013

Jayleen Lévon, is a hard working nurse working at Hopkins Hospital. One day, a handsome man named Ayden, is rolled into the ER, Jayleen doesn't know why she has such a strong pull towards him. He ends up in a coma and she doesn't know why she wants him to wake up so badly. She has a strong pain in her chest when she finds out he's engaged. She finds herself falling in love with him while he was in the coma. She feels idiotic because she knows it won't be possible that she has a slight chance to be with Ayden if he ever wake up, is she right? Or is she alone forever?

KayleeHorn KayleeHorn Jan 17, 2016
Just a suggestion...maybe shorten the title to just "Love in a Coma?" so it gives a little mystery to the reader.
cinco_de_cynthia cinco_de_cynthia Sep 18, 2014
Wow jerk WHAT A POOP NUGGET like she was gonna do it soon but not as harsh!
wonderingcloud wonderingcloud Apr 06, 2014
Seems good reminds me of the film whilst you were sleeping if it's a STORY your doing absolutely brilliant  at rated is just not my thing I like my stories to be just that a story entertainment and it's not fan fic even better
bakergirl269 bakergirl269 Mar 14, 2013
What happend to the baby are they going to get back to gether is the baby going to ge t to stay with his mom or dad
palmer_kathleen palmer_kathleen Jan 23, 2013
Lot of grammar mistakes but the plot seems really good so I guess I'll just have to ignore them for now :)
CourtneyBeavis CourtneyBeavis Nov 08, 2012
Can you pls update soon? I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!