avatar: the last airbender. book4: air (ON HOLD)

avatar: the last airbender. book4: air (ON HOLD)

16.1K Reads 69 Votes 5 Part Story
Lyv L.A. By candie4 Updated Aug 31, 2010

The Gang have to find Zuko's Mother. But  in captiol city prison, a prisner breaks out, guess who? Azlula. Yup. three days after she breaks out, Mai, Zuko's gf, is kidnapped. this story is an action/adventure, comdey, romamce.

kanekillme kanekillme Jul 28, 2015
@Uchiha_Kaida You can read the Avatar comic "The Search" and find out who his mother is.
kanekillme kanekillme Jul 28, 2015
Do you really know how they got his mom back? Creative story, by the way. Grammar should be worked on, but besides that it's very good!
ruttershy ruttershy Apr 19, 2014
Are you like 8 years old? No offense your not very good with grammar and words
candie4 candie4 Feb 15, 2013
@Uchiha_Kaida this is from my own mind yes. Im not sure if ill update it though anymore... i started it when i was younger and it is very bad... >.< like the spelling and such. yeah....
LunaAriel LunaAriel Feb 14, 2013
What I would suggest is to use the spell checker when writing.  You can fix spelling errors very quickly.  And try not to use so much dialogue.  Not every reaction HAS to be spoken. And try to be a little more descriptive.These are just some suggestions.  I like the story so far though :)
Uchiha_Kaida Uchiha_Kaida Jun 08, 2012
Omg I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this show!!! I'm OBSESSED /w it!!! Aang is my favorite! <3