Money, Mansion, School, and a Handful of Cousins.

Money, Mansion, School, and a Handful of Cousins.

5 Part Story 1.2K Reads 15 Votes
Subha Syed By zjqczr Updated Nov 02, 2011

NEW STORY!!

This whole story is dedicated to my cousins: 

-Asif

-Homaira

-Sumaiya

-Nazoa

-Istiak

and sister,

-Deeba

along with my family friends,

-Farhat

-Mehzabin

-Aniqa

luv u guyz all so much :)

ENJOY ;P

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Chapter 1

I got out of the limousine and made my way through the high iron gates that led me straight to hell on earth. Girls swarmed around me making me want to hurl. I spotted my best friend Max leaning against the south wall of the despicably over-sized walls of Raazi High. The ancient walls were covered in vines and had ivy climbing up from the ground. It had huge arch windows and looked more like a church than a school. I hated this place so bad. Just because my ancestors had built this place, i get treated like I'm some kind of delicate flower-like prince who will break if you harmed him. Well i was but only Max knew that. I'm a guy for goodness sake! We love being seen as the hero. NOT the damsel in distres...

zjqczr zjqczr Aug 06, 2010 12:11PM
@jemsparkle there are asian names in there, and no, i am not paki...unfortunately. i love paki's! they are all so pretty/handsome! :) but im from somewhere around there...:)
jemsparkle jemsparkle Aug 06, 2010 09:05AM
Cool.I like it.I saw Asian names in there.You a Paki? I am.I like the story the cliffy was good.
zjqczr zjqczr Jul 12, 2010 01:03PM
@U-kissFreck of course....most facts bout the characters are true, and you know u know it :)
zjqczr zjqczr Jul 12, 2010 01:02PM
@AsifKhan32 i know...azure is he best....simply because he ISNT you ;P
nk7852 nk7852 Jul 12, 2010 04:40AM
please continue…i really want to read it! Ω.Ω nazeira is awesome. :D
myra_angel myra_angel Jul 12, 2010 02:30AM
very good story but you described myra a bit tooooo childish!!!