The Corrider

The Corrider

309 Reads 9 Votes 3 Part Story
Austin Deivert By trevied Updated Jul 11, 2010

a terrifting tale of a young women's haunting of a nameless being

trevied trevied Jul 11, 2010
@tingtamtam yeah my bad lol i have good idea's but my conventions are lacking
- - Jul 11, 2010
liking it so far but do you think you could put it into paragraphs?
                              it would make it easier to read :)
                              just a suggestion
MikeJPW MikeJPW Jul 11, 2010
Very promising! I'm going to keep reading.
                              
                              Keep up the good work!
                              
                              Voted :D
                              
                              
                              ps- check out my stories "Loved to Death" and "The Parks Escape" if you like them comment and vote!
                              
                              -Mike