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To Have Rosaline

To Have Rosaline

38.9K Reads 2.2K Votes 41 Part Story
It's Out There By BelieveNUnbelievable Completed

It wasn't suppose to be like this. 

She was suppose to have the perfect family involving parents unconditionally in love and a little brother she'd do anything for. She was suppose to get to live the life she always wanted and dreamed of. She was suppose to be happy...


None of this was suppose to happen. 


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Coming face to face with one of the worlds most dangerous creatures hidden in the dark and beings that are only suppose to be folklore is not as simple as it seems. 
Battling life and death, evil forces trying to rip her apart at every turn, a bewitching voice she never wanted and two men wanting her love, it's all she can do to hold herself together. 



Will our Rose be able to survive through it all? How much can she take before it's too much? Moreover, will she find love at the end of a dark tunnel? 







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She was frozen in fear, shaking from head to toe as she watched Rhyvos's skin ripple in a way that looked as if his bones were shifting into place. Hair began to grow out of his revealed skin and his face became deformed. She blinked and there stood exactly what you would see in every scary werewolf movie. It was just what Abellon called it. A beast. Nothing of the King's body was left. Only a monster. 

It stood on it's hind legs and slammed it's front feet into the ground when it was only feet from her before letting out a ferocious roar. 

Her sight went black and she felt herself fall. 




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WARNING: SLOW UPDATING UNLESS SAID OTHERWISE. THIS BOOK WILL BE A LITTLE DIFFERENT FROM OTHER WEREWOLF BOOK'S BUT A GOOD DIFFERENT I HOPE. 


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MollyIveson MollyIveson Apr 22
sorry if i over step boundries with suggestions.. 'her job is being' could be replaced by 'she is a' or 'she works as a' which, imo are a bit smoother x
Wolfgirl5729 Wolfgirl5729 Jul 25, 2016
This book is very good so far, but I do see some grammatical mistakes! I suggest proof reading before you punish a chapter!
WriterKellie WriterKellie Apr 05, 2016
Again, I think this is a nice, interesting story that's different from usual~ This chapter is actually a lot better than your prologue!
                              
                              It could use an edit though; in particular, there is some switching of verb tenses (past vs present) that could use some cleaning up.
monkeymehehe monkeymehehe Mar 08, 2016
This is so good. Its like a real novel. Smooth and silky sentences throughout.
spiritbooks78 spiritbooks78 Jul 05, 2016
5'7 is not petite, that's average.  Now 5'3, my height, is petite.
WriterKellie WriterKellie Apr 05, 2016
Interesting premise here! I think it's a bit tell-y and could use an edit, but overall, I really enjoyed the story concept in the prologue. :) Just needs some help on the technical end, but that's nothing too hard to fix!