Alice in Murderland [Hiatus]

Alice in Murderland [Hiatus]

9.5K Reads 201 Votes 7 Part Story
R. Grimm By Rayvin Updated Nov 23, 2012

Alice Nightray was a seemingly normal girl until she fell down the Rabbit Hole. Everything she has ever known is questioned as she stumbles into the land she thought was full of wonder.

  • bookception
  • daffodil
  • dinner
  • dye
  • eyes
  • falling
  • hair
  • hole
  • mentality
  • roommate
  • tea
Rayvin Rayvin May 06, 2013
@writersblockinmyhead Thanks! I'm glad you added it to your library~
                              @NDDragon1500 Thanks for the rad ratings, but what did you mean by "explained a little better"? Which part? 
                              @TheMumbler Thanks! I made a new one so I'm glad to hear feedback on it~Oh, hope you read the story later~
_ephemeral _ephemeral May 05, 2013
I haven't read the story yet, but the cover is amazing! Just saying :)
NDDragon1500 NDDragon1500 May 05, 2013
Exciting, I like this twist to Alice to Wonderland! :) 
                              
                              Plot: 10/10
                              
                              Quality: 9/10 (could have been explained a little better)
                              
                              Overall: 9.5/10
                              
                              Good job! I liked your story. :)
DorothyLydia_ DorothyLydia_ May 05, 2013
omg I love this story so much! My only advice would be to get a better cover! But great story! I'm adding it to my library
redhatted redhatted Mar 06, 2013
This is a really creative idea for a story!! I love Alice in Wonderland, for the concept was so unique. I also really enjoy a good mystery, so this is super cool for me so far!! very different;)
Rayvin Rayvin Dec 08, 2012
@Jade_Rambles Thanks for the comment, first of all. I'm still kind of re-writing the story as it goes on so I'll probably change this chapter a bit to suit my needs like as you said, "slowing it down". I guess I had fast paced drama/action that's hard to digest. I appreciate the feedback.