Alice in Murderland [Hiatus]

Alice in Murderland [Hiatus]

9.4K Reads 208 Votes 7 Part Story
R. Grimm By Rayvin Updated Nov 23, 2012

Alice Nightray was a seemingly normal girl until she fell down the Rabbit Hole. Everything she has ever known is questioned as she stumbles into the land she thought was full of wonder.

Rayvin Rayvin May 06, 2013
@writersblockinmyhead Thanks! I'm glad you added it to your library~
                              @NDDragon1500 Thanks for the rad ratings, but what did you mean by "explained a little better"? Which part? 
                              @TheMumbler Thanks! I made a new one so I'm glad to hear feedback on it~Oh, hope you read the story later~
_ephemeral _ephemeral May 05, 2013
I haven't read the story yet, but the cover is amazing! Just saying :)
NDDragon1500 NDDragon1500 May 05, 2013
Exciting, I like this twist to Alice to Wonderland! :) 
                              
                              Plot: 10/10
                              
                              Quality: 9/10 (could have been explained a little better)
                              
                              Overall: 9.5/10
                              
                              Good job! I liked your story. :)
writersblockinmyhead writersblockinmyhead May 05, 2013
omg I love this story so much! My only advice would be to get a better cover! But great story! I'm adding it to my library
redhatted redhatted Mar 06, 2013
This is a really creative idea for a story!! I love Alice in Wonderland, for the concept was so unique. I also really enjoy a good mystery, so this is super cool for me so far!! very different;)
Rayvin Rayvin Dec 08, 2012
@Jade_Rambles Thanks for the comment, first of all. I'm still kind of re-writing the story as it goes on so I'll probably change this chapter a bit to suit my needs like as you said, "slowing it down". I guess I had fast paced drama/action that's hard to digest. I appreciate the feedback.