The Mer-Prince's Captive

The Mer-Prince's Captive

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Stacy-Ann Humphrey By Amore_wonderland Updated Jun 04, 2017

It was written long before their time a tale of two lovers, of stolen treasures, hidden secrets, love, lost self discovery and rebirth a tale of young Azuri Marina Bleu  and how she became The Mer-Prince's Captive

  • babies
  • fantasy
  • merman
  • prophecy
  • twins
- - Oct 08, 2016
I second what @darkloverose said, this needs some breaks in the text. I can't read this.
Darkloverose Darkloverose Aug 22, 2016
This plot is really good but just a tip: when another characters dialog starts it should be a new paragraph. It helps the audience distinguish who's speaking
- - Oct 08, 2016
This needs some editing. :/ Sorry, but it was hard for me to read this.
Amore_wonderland Amore_wonderland Mar 27, 2015
Thanks so much for reading my book and i'm working on updating asap