Wanna Kiss Me Back? - NaNoWriMo Entry

Wanna Kiss Me Back? - NaNoWriMo Entry

83.5K Reads 3K Votes 12 Part Story
Joseph Mauro By Jos123B Completed

A boy had his first kiss stolen from him at a summer camp by his cabin mate, Noel, at the age of five. The kiss haunts him ever since, though at seventeen he has tried to move on with his life. So when the boy moves into his school, will he discover that those are the lips he's been obsessed over or will he ignore the life-changing event?

I'm not the only one that expieriences that? Thank god i thought i was going blind the first time that happened
Chloe_Pont Chloe_Pont Aug 04
Giant swings are awesome. I went on one that was near a cliff, facing the sea and in a small valley thing between two hills. It felt like I was going to go off the cliff and into the sea!!
Is no one going to watch reckless 7 year old children in the wilderness?
VoiceThief VoiceThief Dec 31, 2013
It's a really good plot so far, but you might want to consider cutting down the detail to make the paragraphs less long. Extraneous detail can sometimes make a story seem tedious to read and will quickly make your reader bored. It's pretty good, though. Well written and original :)