Wanna Kiss Me Back? - NaNoWriMo Entry

Wanna Kiss Me Back? - NaNoWriMo Entry

69.4K Reads 2.4K Votes 12 Part Story
Joseph Mauro By Jos123B Completed

A boy had his first kiss stolen from him at a summer camp by his cabin mate, Noel, at the age of five. The kiss haunts him ever since, though at seventeen he has tried to move on with his life. So when the boy moves into his school, will he discover that those are the lips he's been obsessed over or will he ignore the life-changing event?

Well insomnia is just continually having trouble going staying asleep, so I'm pretty sure he has insomnia...
- - Jun 07
Gosh!!! This part got me up all night hahahaha loving this. There maybe few errors here and there... Anyways loved it... 
                              
                              Sorry for the criticism... 😊
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Me trying too force myself too go to sleep after reading a whole wattpad book
katiekat53 katiekat53 Jul 16
Ummmm I know he's little but the part where he thought a out licking the wet wood triggers dirty thoughts XD
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VoiceThief VoiceThief Dec 31, 2013
It's a really good plot so far, but you might want to consider cutting down the detail to make the paragraphs less long. Extraneous detail can sometimes make a story seem tedious to read and will quickly make your reader bored. It's pretty good, though. Well written and original :)