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The Tomboy with The Jordan's

The Tomboy with The Jordan's

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Kennedy Chloe is the only girl with two older brothers. As a result, she dresses like a tomboy and owns many pair of Jordan's. However, when she enters sixth grade she meets a boy who catches her eye. But, he is not interested in Kennedy because of her appearance. He said he prefers girly girls that are hot, not a macho man. Years later Kennedy and Giorgio meet again in high school. However, Giorgio still isn't interested in Kennedy. Likewise, years later he has a new neighbors move into the house next to his. Giorgio defines his new neighbor as "banging hot".

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