Alpha...Luna

Alpha...Luna

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books-for-a-life By books-for-a-life Updated Sep 12

Previously called: Yours? Not! I deleted the story changed it and now it's back. YAY!
"Unfortunately our Alpha is terribly busy right now I am the beta, my name is Liam." That's it! Suddenly in the back of my mind something clicked. this was the pack I ran away from. 
I faked a smile and extended my hand to him.
"Alpha Scarlet." I introduced myself. His smile faltered for the briefest moment. then he showed us to our rooms.
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Scarlet was the daughter of the Beta but her life was in no way good. She was constantly tormented by her older brother and his best friend the Alpha. She kept telling herself that it was all going to be okay that when she met her mate he would fix it all well...that didn't happen; in fact her mate and tormenter the Alpha rejected her. So she ran she ran hard and fast. She made a new life for herself as the Alpha of one of the strongest packs in the world. But now, two years later he wants her back. So what does she do?

Sasori_Puppet Sasori_Puppet Jul 22, 2015
It sounds good, but not sure how I would react if she accepts her mate again.
ShiHinton ShiHinton Jun 18, 2015
Yassss honey yassss I'm glad she had some big girl bålls  and became alpha and made her pack 10 times better
Atsuka_Wolfcat Atsuka_Wolfcat Jan 25, 2015
@books-for-a-life I would just comment the small ones and pm to you for the other
Atsuka_Wolfcat Atsuka_Wolfcat Jan 21, 2015
@books-for-a-life Awesome. Depends on how you wanna pay me >:3 Nah joking lol but it does depend on how you want to do it. Like pm or just comment the mistake or whatever?
Atsuka_Wolfcat Atsuka_Wolfcat Jan 21, 2015
@books-for-a-life No one is perfect I understand that. Honestly I could offer some help since I've done this before to other books/stories in here that needed major corrections and actually this is just might be one of the best written ones so no worries xD
Atsuka_Wolfcat Atsuka_Wolfcat Jan 20, 2015
It's a great story so far but, not to be rude, it needs some corrections. Sorry I couldn't help it, since I am an English nerd :P sort of, I guess.