The Exile: Into the Forge (2nd Draft)
"There are two words that sum up the situation on Artania perfectly: Graphite everywhere. And it is. Skin. Hair. Fingernails. Clothes. Food. Mouth. Nose. Undoubtedly lungs. It's not that there aren't any other tiny mining planets in the region, but Artania is the most miserable by far. We are in most respects, alone in the universe; unneeded, unwanted, and unnoticed. Just like me."
Seventeen-year-old Adam is given the chance to change his life forever when he's offered the chance to train at Intrepid Legions, a high-level security agency. But he soon learns that he may have gotten more than he bargained for when he begins chasing after a mystery involving one of the other students and begins unearthing secrets about the organization and even about himself. Can he figure out what exactly he's gotten himself into before he does something he'll regret forever?
***This is still just a second draft and by no means my last, so I'll be doing tweaking here and there. I want to hear peoples' thoughts on my writing. Don't spare my feelings! I will try to post a new chapter every Sunday night/Monday morning and will sometimes post an edited version (based on feedback ) midway through the week.***