A girl who is raised by an alien race is sent to infiltrate the human population. Can she survive undetected among them or will she be caught up in the bustle of an unfamiliar planet?
Done with part 1. I find her adjusting to the earth pretty realistic but you would think that aliens who know about human,s progress on physics would tell her about water. Still a good story, though.
This needs some more comments, it,s far better then most of the drivel on this site. Well written and nary a mistake.
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amazing, keep it up(:
wow, i loved the description even. Keep it up! WRITE MORE!!! :D