Falling in his own game

Falling in his own game

471K Reads 11.7K Votes 37 Part Story
Aphrodite By Junexxi Completed

OLD TITLE: Stuck with the man who hates me.

He despise her after she hurt his little sister, but then in this small world. Their parents arranged then into marriage... Now he made  the perfect plan, a bittersweet revenge, his little game: to make her fall for him.
... or will his game turn the other way around?
#339-Romance(JUNE 2015)
#11- General Fiction (Dec 2015)
COMPLETED(June 5,2015)

Arywrites13 Arywrites13 Apr 19
Your story is really good but I would suggest you get help from an editor 😊 to get u maximum reads bc it deserves it
WE"LL SEE ABOUT THAT MR.JULIAN 
                              (I forgot his last name, well I don't know it)
yrtufino yrtufino Aug 16
Thats what all wattpad male characters want " make them fall in love then break their hearts" ... I say four words to you " good luck with that "...
Just some help with grammar and punctuation:
                              1.) Julian WATCHED (past tense) as his parents gave HIS fiancé a warm welcome.
                              And before transition words such as: yet, in fact, but, and etc use a comma. 
                              Ex: An older one which he assumed (past tense) is their mother, (comma) and an older.....
peaches0707 peaches0707 Jul 19
Such a sweet man, wanting revenge,  when he doesn't even know what is going on.
The book would have been good if you each of them their own POV