Finite Misery

Finite Misery

308 Reads 6 Votes 3 Part Story
Alex Vrettos By Avrettos Completed

Finite Misery is about a girl who's grey cloud of a life finds a silver lining when she finds out about the creation of an artificial afterlife called The Hereafter. Tired of life she sees a glimmer of hope for a second chance. The trouble is they don't let suicides in, so she hatches a devious plan.

Finite Misery is the extended prologue to my novel - The Hereafter - available on Amazon, Kindle, Kobo or Nook.

Avrettos Avrettos Jun 07, 2011
@TheOrangutan Cheers for the heads up Gav. Not sure what was wrong but I seem to have fixed it!
Avrettos Avrettos Jun 07, 2011
@TheOrangutan Cheers Gav, I've always liked the opening but always had a subtle doubt somewhere in the back of my mind that I couldn't quite put my finger on. It is a little appeased now.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Jun 05, 2011
For some reason the formatting on this one is a little odd, probably wattpad screwing things around, but you might want to take a look, particularly effects the ends of pages...
                              
                              Another clever chapter.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Jun 05, 2011
A very neat opening to a new story. The first couple of paragraphs in particular were descriptively stunning, wonderful use of language. I like the horror you convey with the dog too. Nicely done, Gav