A porcelain doll - Short Story (completed)

A porcelain doll - Short Story (completed)

1 Part Story 2.1K Reads 43 Votes
My shortened name...Jay By simplyhysterical Completed

Olivia is living a bleak existence. Just continuing to exist for another day, trying to find  something worth living for. And then she finds it. In the form of a porcelain doll...

Diddlybob09 Diddlybob09 Oct 31, 2015 07:16PM
that was amazing, I had to hold back tears and I was smiling the whole time! :)
Kumoriko Kumoriko Apr 26, 2014 08:54AM
This was really interesting! I actually started to cry a little bit! Very well descriptive. If your teacher does not give you an A then they need to go back to college.
@123icecream4 Hey thanks for reading this too :) I got somewhere in the 70s- 75% maybe. Thanks for all your support :))
123icecream4 123icecream4 Jul 13, 2013 07:01AM
Yet another great story:) if you don't mind me asking, what was the story graded? It must have been high:)
@ElleLovesWriting just noticed your comment. You read the story? Wow I'm so happy you liked it. It means a lot. I plan to write a book soon :)
@SaraSchroeder Thanks for reading, it was a year ago. I think I got seventy percent or something. Glad you liked it :)