about a very young girl who starts mother hood way to young and doesnt know what real love is she has big dreams for her self and family but will they ever come true or will life carry on to be a drag of hard time......NOT A SKET STORY!!!
This good!! but why do you keep changing her age? Started of being a 11 yr old mum to 13 then it was her 15 birthday and it says she's 14? It's confusing but it's still gudd story :)
She was 11 at dee tym she got pregnant?
Ur messed up , I LOVE THE STORY :)
Your writing style is very visual, gets you straight into the characters, however, your choice of language is colourfull to say the least but fits the story you are trying to portray.
I don't really understand the words can u start puttin quotes on wat ppl r sayin
read my other stories after this one there much clearer and much better in discription :)
For page three I don't know whostslking and or saying what it's kind of confusing