I've never forgotten you (Edward Elric LEMON)

I've never forgotten you (Edward Elric LEMON)

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Allison McCarthy By AllisonElric103 Updated Nov 02, 2012

THIS IS A LEMON STORY (JUST MAKING THAT CLEAR), anyway my friend was had the idea of the story. She just told me to write it and post it up on here. LOL

Mewmew4000 Mewmew4000 Oct 27, 2015
I don't want to come off rude but I remember reading this when quizilla was still a thing. And I read this when I was about 13 or 15 and I'm 21 now.  If this is not yours and you got it off from someone else on quizilla then that is wrong. But if you are the same person then I am sorry.
Mudkip-Mikasa Mudkip-Mikasa Aug 01, 2015
I don't understand. If this story is with your own character you should put it into a proper 3rd person prospective. It gets really weird when you put you even thou it your character, it mostly sounds like a reader book if you use "you" .
MadokaHatake MadokaHatake Jan 26, 2015
I AM NOT OKEY WITH THIS.ITS TO MUCH PERFECTION IN ONE PLACE.I  AM CRYING AND LAUGHING AND SCREAMING AT SAME TIME ~(*+﹏+*)~ *NOSEBLEED*
AudriIsSenpai AudriIsSenpai Jan 20, 2015
Why did you put it in second person, but put your name instead of the readers name when you are putting it in 2nd person view? You either do it 3rd or 1st person when you are going to yourself.