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My Sister's Boyfriend

My Sister's Boyfriend

249K Reads 6.8K Votes 25 Part Story
Zoey L. <3 By FallenAngelxox Completed

It may seem like the typical romance story, a shy unpopular girl meets the popular, bad-ass who turns out to be the man of her dreams and they fall deeply and immensely in love in one night and almost from the minute they lay eyes on one another. But what would you do if you later found out that he didn't remember any of it? It's been 2 years now, and Nina hasn't forgotten about that night, but Ian is doing fine with his life, he's even dating Nina's sister, Claire! Nina wants him back, she needs him back, but with a already weak relationship with her sister, does she really have the choice to fiddle with it? After given the job to tutor the love of her life, she tries hard to resist from saying or doing anything but destiny is destiny and in the end, you can't change it no matter how much you try.

annietheoncer annietheoncer Jul 20, 2016
Ewwww, I think I'm about to puke. 
                                 No I think I just did.
Dani_is_dead Dani_is_dead Jun 27, 2016
He sounds a lot like Andy biersack, no wonder he is so good looking
karen_ninah karen_ninah Sep 09, 2015
I wouldn't think I was better than anyone at all. I mean, he had I chance to get out of hell, yet he was stupid and stayed behind ._.
KbLis1 KbLis1 Mar 29, 2014
Good start I'm gonna continue she need some boost to her self esteem
pepsi_panda pepsi_panda Mar 14, 2014
I've never watched the vampire diaries, so I'm not quite familiar with the characters. I think that this is an interesting start though! :)  your cover is ABSOLUTLEY beautiful by the way~!
LunatikLucy LunatikLucy Mar 14, 2014
You need to brush up on your dialogue grammar. It's good for the most part, but definitely needs fixing up. Also, you probably need to proof read aloud. You have some missing words here and there.
                              Info dump alert! You tell the reader everything.  Show, not tell.