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Unwanted Thoughts

Unwanted Thoughts

1.3K Reads 44 Votes 8 Part Story
L A C E Y  R A E L E E By Lacey2GalaxyB Updated Dec 18, 2015

The idea was good. 
The dream; plausible.
The over all experience... 
Lets just say, I am going to stick with it being a dream next time.

SereneStoryteller SereneStoryteller Jun 01, 2012
Some of the greatest poems are short. This should be one of them. Keep writing!
SereneStoryteller SereneStoryteller Jun 01, 2012
Hmm it sounds riddle-like. This could probably be explained by some unspoken event? it sounds as though the narrator enjoys some peace and solitude in a loud, crazy world. I like it very much. Keep writing!
MuYing MuYing Nov 12, 2010
i love this i really do loves this , to me this is what poetry is supposed to be like ...keep it up =) 
chairsniffa chairsniffa Oct 27, 2010
So good this poem I was transported to a fairytale kingdom that always had a happy ending lol
Happy_24_7 Happy_24_7 Aug 31, 2010
ooooo this was a good one to!!
                              short and to the point!
                              *voted!* (again!! lol )