The idea was good.
The dream; plausible.
The over all experience...
Lets just say, I am going to stick with it being a dream next time.
Some of the greatest poems are short. This should be one of them. Keep writing!
Hmm it sounds riddle-like. This could probably be explained by some unspoken event? it sounds as though the narrator enjoys some peace and solitude in a loud, crazy world. I like it very much. Keep writing!
i love this i really do loves this , to me this is what poetry is supposed to be like ...keep it up =)
So good this poem I was transported to a fairytale kingdom that always had a happy ending lol
ooooo this was a good one to!!
short and to the point!
*voted!* (again!! lol )