Unwanted Thoughts

Unwanted Thoughts

1.3K Reads 44 Votes 8 Part Story
L A C E Y  R A E L E E By Lacey2GalaxyB Updated Dec 18, 2015

The idea was good. 
The dream; plausible.
The over all experience... 
Lets just say, I am going to stick with it being a dream next time.

  • death
  • desire
  • high
  • life
  • loathe
  • love
  • memories
  • photography
  • photos
  • poems
  • poetry
  • regret
  • treasure
SereneStoryteller SereneStoryteller Jun 01, 2012
Some of the greatest poems are short. This should be one of them. Keep writing!
SereneStoryteller SereneStoryteller Jun 01, 2012
Hmm it sounds riddle-like. This could probably be explained by some unspoken event? it sounds as though the narrator enjoys some peace and solitude in a loud, crazy world. I like it very much. Keep writing!
MuYing MuYing Nov 12, 2010
i love this i really do loves this , to me this is what poetry is supposed to be like ...keep it up =) 
chairsniffa chairsniffa Oct 27, 2010
So good this poem I was transported to a fairytale kingdom that always had a happy ending lol
Happy_24_7 Happy_24_7 Aug 31, 2010
ooooo this was a good one to!!
                              short and to the point!
                              *voted!* (again!! lol )