Please Dont Go

Please Dont Go

3.3K Reads 28 Votes 5 Part Story
Cyri Jay By MaybeJustMaybe Updated Aug 15, 2010

The Please Dont Go series is about a girl who is tormented by the men in her life, her dad left her, her mums lovers hate her and the people at her school are scared of her. But no one would of expected someone could possibley like her. But some one does and the only problems are her mum, communication and fate.

momokitty momokitty Nov 22, 2010
This is sooooooo good! I like how she says, "Three guess. Hmm, the guy next door, the guy next door, and the guy next door!" LoL
momokitty momokitty Nov 22, 2010
This story is great! I love how you get into great details. 
Lets_Hi5 Lets_Hi5 Jul 13, 2010
Awesome. I like your writing style. But just remember to spell check but other than that i'm on to the next chappie
                              P.S could you look at mine?
softballgirl softballgirl Jul 10, 2010
wow i like this alot!!!!!:) :) :) don't stop writing! your good at it!(:
MaybeJustMaybe MaybeJustMaybe Jul 10, 2010
Do you think there is anything i could improve on? 
                              Any ideas for the next part?