When It Rains

When It Rains

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LoveScripter By LoveScripter Updated Apr 12, 2017

NOTE FROM AUTHOR: "I wrote this book in High school, so if you don't like it and find it poorly written, I completely understand" 
Jared Evans could make any girl swoon. He had the face of a greek god and the body of a lean mean athlete. Yet he never understood what real love meant. Although privileged, he lived quite a dysfunctional home. His parents often fought and had affairs throughout his childhood. As a boy, he sought refuge at his best friend's home to escape his troubles. There he experienced normal. There he learned what a real family was like. There he met the most delicate soul in the form of a beautiful girl. and he swore to protect it.  

Jared has never been interested with Josh's  little sister, yet he cared for her more than anyone he has ever known. Before leaving for college, he accepted a stupid bet. To prove that Scarlett didn't have a crush on him, Josh dared him to kiss her!

The whole thing ended with a severed friendship and a broken heart. Scarlett promises to never forgive him and Jared is utterly devastated with guilt. 

Two years later, Jared finds Scarlett attending his University. And to his surprise, she is not that humble, or kind little girl he once remembered.

Written: 2010 / Re-written: 2015

  • bestfriend
  • bigbrother
  • brother
  • college
  • comedy
  • friends
  • littlesister
  • love
  • romance
  • unrequited
mxstyc mxstyc Mar 25, 2017
I'm sitting here thanking god that my siblings are nothing like him
tis1kay tis1kay Feb 09, 2017
My Mum told me the other day that out of my twin brother and i, she thought i would leave as soon as possible... She isn't wrong 😂
josy_murillo josy_murillo Jan 08, 2017
Honestly I would never talk to him again. F you mean your going to make a bet on me?
BrittanySteele28 BrittanySteele28 Aug 15, 2018
Omg I just read the thing for ur story and would love to read it but see u stopped writing........ I sincerely hope u start writing again soon so I can enjoy ur story I'm sure I'm not the only one!!!!!😉