But you came along

But you came along

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What-the-hell-ppl By What-the-hell-ppl Updated Jun 09, 2016

Alexandra doesn't want a mate but when she finds hers will the change her mind?

  • girlxgirl
  • happy
  • lesbian
  • love
  • werewolf
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 10, 2017
It feels like the name of the pack should be capitalized, but that might just be me.
😂 oh yes the good old days, starting  fires in the cafeteria and giving lunch ladies heart palpitations
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 10, 2017
lol.
                              
                              Also, there needs to be some kind of punctuation inside of the quotation marks. A comma would probably be best.
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 10, 2017
Punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. 
                              
                              Also, why is the word "may" capitalized.
ThatCrazyBlob_1 ThatCrazyBlob_1 Nov 10, 2017
Burnett?
                              
                              Also, all of the "ands" make this paragraph boring and repetitive. Try to find other sentence starters.
Weeaboo_AllAround Weeaboo_AllAround Aug 14, 2016
This girl sounds like me... And Alexandra is like my fronted Gaby.... OMG