But you came along

But you came along

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What-the-hell-ppl By What-the-hell-ppl Updated Jun 09, 2016

Alexandra doesn't want a mate but when she finds hers will the change her mind?

  • girlxgirl
  • happy
  • lesbian
  • love
  • werewolf
It feels like the name of the pack should be capitalized, but that might just be me.
lol.
                              
                              Also, there needs to be some kind of punctuation inside of the quotation marks. A comma would probably be best.
Punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. 
                              
                              Also, why is the word "may" capitalized.
Burnett?
                              
                              Also, all of the "ands" make this paragraph boring and repetitive. Try to find other sentence starters.
Weeaboo_AllAround Weeaboo_AllAround Aug 14, 2016
This girl sounds like me... And Alexandra is like my fronted Gaby.... OMG
arigatu2006 arigatu2006 Jul 08, 2016
I hate her how can she have to mate?  Anyway she would choose dragon