my poems... :)
I think this is really creative, with 4 questions each of who, what, when, where and why. The repitition and selection of Qs really help to convey the emotion. This kinda depressing poem though - great reflection.
Good poem here. yeah it is well-written and a great poem expressing guilt and helplessness. :)
Good, I can feel the emotion quite well. The wording is very "too the point-ish" hahaha. :) Try to use proper grammer (capitalization) :D
love it theres only one mistake and that is opon should be upon
I love the way there is strong depcition of wondering what's next ... but knowing that it will happen regardless. Good strength in the simple diction ... wonderful