Fragments Of My Imagination

Fragments Of My Imagination

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orangeroo By orangeroo Updated Jul 17, 2010

my poems... :)

JPKent JPKent Nov 18, 2011
I think this is really creative, with 4 questions each of who, what, when, where and why. The repitition and selection of Qs really help to convey the emotion. This kinda depressing poem though - great reflection. 
                              
                              Will
JPKent JPKent Nov 18, 2011
Good poem here. yeah it is well-written and a great poem expressing guilt and helplessness. :)
                              
                              Will
cristinaaragon cristinaaragon Apr 29, 2011
Good, I can feel the emotion quite well. The wording is very "too the point-ish" hahaha. :) Try to use proper grammer (capitalization) :D
OMGItsCrystal OMGItsCrystal Aug 16, 2010
love it theres only one mistake and that is opon should be upon
Incubustrav421 Incubustrav421 Jul 07, 2010
I love the way there is strong depcition of wondering what's next ... but knowing that it will happen regardless.  Good strength in the simple diction ... wonderful