Jaspers Dirty Little Secret's/ On Hold

Jaspers Dirty Little Secret's/ On Hold

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dianabishop359 By dianabishop359 Updated Sep 29

Major Editing / On Hold

Prolog

Jasper has a thing for a girl named Isabella but she doesn't know it and she's with someone else so how is jasper going to tell Isabella that he loves her if she is with someone else. 


I guess ur gonna have to read and find out more


My book is on hold and redoing it thank you

xXxRabbitxXx xXxRabbitxXx Nov 15, 2014
Just so you know your story reads as though Isabella is incredibly bored to death with her own story. Try to liven it up a bit. Honestly not being mean. Just trying to help with some constructive criticism.