When Love Is Forgotten

When Love Is Forgotten

86.3K Reads 2.8K Votes 17 Part Story
Aleesha Splinter By Aleespli21 Completed

Auburn thought she knew what love was, until the accident of course...
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With a Masters Degree in teaching, a PhD in English, and a ring on her finger,  Auburn Monroe is just another typical college graduate. She never thought anything bad could happen to her. That is, until she comes to think that her fiance is hiding a deep secret from her. On her way to catch him in the act, however, she gets in a bad accident...one that sends her whole life upside down...

Loving thebaction scene and auburn figure thete was something goung on in her fiance lufe that she didn't thinl he doesn't love her like she loves him .she aldo thinks that he is cheating on her with someone to as well and plus lying to her to getbaway to be with that petson instead of her.
Serenavw98 Serenavw98 May 10, 2015
Great setup and details and wow great way to end it too it def makes me want to read more :)
dianaawinters dianaawinters Apr 17, 2015
Great prologue. You set your story up nicely without giving away too much. You did a really good job at giving the reader a small insight as to what the story will be about.
                              
                              A few of the sentences didn't quite flow right, but that is an easy fix.
                              
                              Great start!
viva-queen viva-queen Apr 09, 2015
this prologue was the perfect set up, it grabbed my attention all through out and left me intrigued and wanting to know what happens next!
toffeechip toffeechip Apr 08, 2015
This I great. I love the description but remember we have 5 senses  so feel taste ect u went straight away in to the action which brings the reader in and I love how u left a almost question about their marson and auburn relationship. Very good out of 10
                              8/10
Reese_Cadwell Reese_Cadwell Apr 02, 2015
Very nice! I already feel connected and knowledgeable about the type of guy she's engaged to only through the first chapter!