Cowgirl

Cowgirl

23.4K Reads 864 Votes 11 Part Story
Ruth✨ By FaerieLightss Completed

[i am in the process of editing this for mistakes and generally improving it]
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"The sound of boots clunking on the wooden floor made everyone in the pub fall silent. The person took off their brimmed hat to let long dark hair fall down her back. People started whispering. She got to the counter and stood waiting, while the barman just gawped.

"Well? Are you not going to serve me because I am a girl?" She said boldly.

"Oh, oh, I...I'm sorry ma'am... wh...what can I get you?" The barman stuttered.

"I'll have a beer."

Someone whistled loudly, but the girl ignored it. Her brown eyes stayed alert and open, her thin lips showing no expression. She looked like a teenager and probably was. She was wearing a beige shirt, the top two buttons undone, and her boots were chocolate brown with golden spurs, which complemented her skintight pale jodhpurs.

"Oooh, feisty," a man said, making people laugh. In the blink of an eye, a pistol was pointed in his direction."

  • adventure
  • completed
  • cowboy
  • cowgirl
  • deserts
  • finished
  • romamtic
  • romance
  • western
bekk1962 bekk1962 Feb 14
May I ask if you are from Europe, England, Scottish, even Australian? I ask because of the way you word things, words you use. Like pub and not saloon, meters not miles, wine not whisky, ect. Even having fireplaces in the hotel rooms. Don't get me wrong I am enjoying the story though.
DarielaAbe DarielaAbe Jan 08
this is SO ME I LOVE YOUR WRITING OH MY GOSH I AM IN LOVE WIH THIS OU MY DEAR WRITER ARE AMAZING
lidyalewis lidyalewis Feb 01, 2017
😁😁😁😁😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
hannah_558 hannah_558 Oct 26, 2014
Wow! That was a great chapter. I can't wait until you write the next chapter! I'm so excited!
hannah_558 hannah_558 Oct 21, 2014
Wow!That was a great way to start your story and I can't wait till you keep writing!